Thursday, January 23, 2020

Essay due 1/23-1/28 AND return novel copies


Late work will lose 5 points for each day late.  Any work given after 1/28 is considered late.  If students need to finish typing or print the work, they can come in during a lunch period.  It will not be something they can print during class next week.

Hand in:
Top: Final essay to grade
Middle: Draft work (most students have yellow paper as draft)
Bottom: Outline work (as is--no additions or adjustments needed)
Make sure to return the copies of A Long Walk to Water (please and thank you!).

ADDITIONAL edits not listed on the edit checklist: 
1) remove all language that refers to you or your reader (me/my/I/you)  
2) remove all language that refers to parts of the essay (essay/claim/evidence)
3)essay format has indents to separate paragraphs--not extra spaces between paragraphs
If typed the essay is double-spaced and the margin in on the left (do not center your essay)


Rubric
4
Introduction
W.2
R.1-R.9
Introduction is thorough:
  • Contains strong, clear claim
  • Contains a brief description of the novel
  • Identifies title and author
Body Paragraph #1
W.9
R.1-R.9
Paragraph is thorough: 
  • Contains strong statement that supports the claim (A)
  • Contains clear context for evidence
  • Cites strong, relevant evidence (C)
  • Explanation/Analysis of evidence is clear and thorough (E)
Body Paragraph #2
W.9
R.1-R.9
Paragraph is thorough: 
  • Contains strong statement that supports the claim (A)
  • Contains clear context for evidence
  • Cites strong, relevant evidence (C)
  • Explanation/Analysis of evidence is clear and thorough (E)
Body Paragraph #3
W.9
R.1-R.9
Paragraph is thorough: 
  • Contains strong statement that supports the claim (A)
  • Contains clear context for evidence
  • Cites strong, relevant evidence (C)
  • Explanation/Analysis of evidence is clear and thorough (E)
Conclusion
W.2
  • Restates claim
  • Contains relevant connection to the world
  • Notable sense of voice
Organization & Conventions
W.2
L.1  L.2
L.3  L.6

  • Essay has a formal style using strong vocabulary and a notable sense of voice
  • Effectively uses transition words
  • Demonstrates strong command of conventions with few errors